Kuroki Gekidou

[strangevisitor]

To begin with, Welcome to Konoha! Always happy to see a new face, and a new bio.

I'm Strange, one of your friendly neighborhood ANBU, and I'll be checking your bio today

First off, thanks for posting an in-depth, legible, and organized bio. We love this, it makes our job as staff MUCH easier.

I HEAVILY regret to inform you, though, that Missing Nins are NOT permitted on a normal basis, especially not for a just-registered member. Special cases could occur, but this has to be discussed beforehand with our Admin/Hokage, Tensei Kaori.

All the rules and regulations for joining the Interactive Fanfiction can be found in the Getting Started, so I would highly suggest going through the section and reading all of what's there, so we can get you a perfectly legitimate character up and running.

Thanks for showing interest in our IF, feel free to reply here, PM me, or AIM me if you have any questions!

[Tensei Kaori]

Since Strangevisitor already said everything that needs to be said, I'm just popping in to say welcome! From the well-written, organized nature of your biography, I can easily say that I look forward to seeing you in the IF. Also, if you have some ideas you'd like to try out and get Staff feedback on, feel free to post in the ANBU Headquarters board, and the Staff will be more than happy to assist you.

Thanks again, and welcome to Konoha! ^^

[Kuroki Gekidou]

Modified my village and position. Recheck please.

[Hatake Hiroshi]

Hello there! My name is Hatake Hiroshi, ANBU Squad Leader. I am here to review your character's bio for approval. I commend you on how well-written and organized the biography is, however, I regret to inform you that due to a few of things in the history, I cannot, in good conscience, approve it.

When Kuroki joined his first squad his Jonin sensei was himself recently promoted and thus lacked the experience and quick thinking to effectively lead his team. Kuroki would then use this to his advantage to call the shots during a few missions.

This is the first issue I found when reviewing the character's history. His sensei was promoted to Jounin for a reason. If he lacked the skills to effectively lead a team of genin, then he would still be in the lower ranks, however, I would be willing to accept this if there were some reason why during his time as a beginner sensei he had some problems.

With the coming of the Chuunin exams Kuroki would later tell how he single handedly lead his team through the trials and tribulations. In reality this may not be true but what can be said for sure was while in that exam he gradually found killing another human easier and easier even going out of his way to destroy teams from other villages. During the one on one matches in the Chuunin exams Kuroki came face to face with his rival from the academy in town. A smile came to his face before the match started, when the instructor waved the flag however Kuroki sped out of his spot and a large battle proceeded with Kuroki becoming the victor. The rest of the matches were mere childsplay now that his biggest threat was gone.

It is understandable that Kuroki would find taking out his rival satisfying, but the fact that he found more and more ease in killing off several other competitors is too much. Keep in mind, your character is still only a genin during the Chuunin Exams. While they would be capable of taking out a few weaker genin, by no means would he be taking out two and three teams during one single event. Yes, during the Forest of Death event, it is inevitable for competitors to parish, but not by the hand of single genin. That is way too overpowering! Your character is not the only one participating, and he is most certainly cannot be the strongest... remember that.

As of late Kuroki has become a recluse only coming out to the most dangerous missions....

Being a Jounin of Konoha, your character is obligated to complete any missions that he is assigned by the Hokage whether they are really that dangerous or not. When you accept promotion to a high rank, you accept the responsibilities that come with it, meaning you don't have the ability to pick and choose what missions you go on.

One last qualm I have with your bio is the fact that you mention that your character's enjoyment of killing small animals. This has nothing to do with the rules of the IF, but rather the reputation of the boards. We would like to maintain a more family-friendly environment for board guests, as we have no idea exactly who is visiting. We also have younger members, some of which that might have responsible parents that keep tabs on what their children are viewing, therefore, we would like to keep the boards as clean as possible without being too strict. So, I ask you kindly to please take it out.

For the smoothest and fastest approval possible, the points I have described above need to be toned down, taken out, or given a more thorough explanation. Action will be taken if you fail to cooperate with the rules of the Interactive Fanfiction and Konoha Village boards as a whole.

[Kuroki Gekidou]

1. The jonin thing was addressed by me and the admin already, she stated what i had was fine. 2. the killing was also addressed by me and the admin 3. shinobi are allowed to deny any mission they please, meaning Kuroki simply would deny any mission given to him that he didnt see suited to his need to kill.

[Hatake Hiroshi]

Let's get a few things straight here, buddy. I am second in command on this board, which means I have just about as much authority over you as the Admin does, and I already know what you have discussed with the her and exactly how much trouble you've been giving her and another Staff member over it. It doesn't matter how much you argue that you have a reason to be a godmodder, all attempts at persuading the Staff to approve a character that is against the rules will be futile. Just because we're asking you to tweak things doesn't mean we want you to change your character completely. It's fine if you want to have a sadistic, gore-driven character, but there are limits as to how far you can take it.

1. The jonin thing was addressed by me and the admin already, she stated what i had was fine.

I am very well aware of what she said... That it's fine if there is a reason why. What did I do? I asked you to further elaborate on the reason why your Jounin sensei was ineffective in leading your team, but you have neglected to do so. Like I said, they would not have been promoted had they lacked any leadership skills.

2. the killing was also addressed by me and the admin

2. You were also asked to tone the killing down, which has still not been done. When you submit a biography to be approved on this board, being vague and letting the reader fill in the details for themselves is not going to fly... especially when the readers are the ones that have to approve the bio.

3. shinobi are allowed to deny any mission they please, meaning Kuroki simply would deny any mission given to him that he didnt see suited to his need to kill.

3. That may be so in the series, but not on this board. Mission assignments are given out by the Hokage, who decides what characters are the most qualified for whatever tasks the mission involves. If you decline a mission, that's your loss.

I warned you in my last post, action will be taken if you do not adhere to the rules of the Interactive Fanfiction and the Konoha Village Forums as a whole. You clearly have not read the rules... or think they do not apply to you, so let me give a little bit of a reminder:

IMPORTANT NOTE: By joining this forum, you agree to abide by all the rules – this includes the decisions and instructions of staff members. If for any reason you behave as though the rules don't apply to you, we as the Staff reserve the right to BAN you, no questions asked. However, if you respect the rules and the staff, there's a lot of fun to be had, and it's my hope that everyone can have fun together.

The rules are located here in case you want to check and make sure I wasn't making it up. If you would still like to participate in this fan fiction, I suggest you either shape up or ship out. You can't always have it your way.

[Kuroki Gekidou]

application deleted, i have no time for the trivial details. delete this thread now.

i might re-post a more serious one if you're lucky.

[Hatake Hiroshi]

No time for trivial details? Ha! You must really not care about being involved in the IF or you would have done what we had asked you to do from the very beginning. In the event that you choose to submit another biography for approval, I sincerely hope you have gained some maturity and respect for the rules and for the Staff that enforce them.

As for the deletion of this thread, demanding me to do it will get you absolutely nowhere. This thread is now locked, but it will remain up for viewing by the Admin. Its deletion is at her discretion.