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Post by Kiel on Jul 20, 2005 14:22:21 GMT -5
Good morning starshine, the earth says hello...*awkward silence* No, you didn't misread the title of this thread. It is actually called "Hinata and the Chocolate Factory" Why is it called this you wonder? Well I'm glad you asked. This is my latest ff.net fanfiction. Inspired by the work of Roald Dahl (and the subsequent acting of Gene Wilder and Johnny Depp) I've created this little Naruto-themed tribute. Hinata is a poor little girl in the Konohagakure. Earning only enough to eat wattery cabbage soup, the one thing she longs for more than anything is... chocolateWon't be surprised when she discovers she's been invited to the most wonderous chocolate factory on eath! Hilarity, drama, and candy ensue in Hinata and the Chocolate FactoryCheck it out at www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2493886&chapter=1 |
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Post by Nayo-Chan on Jul 20, 2005 18:02:50 GMT -5
I warmly....shake your hand in welcom....*silence*
ill have to check out ur story soon!
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Post by Kiel on Jul 20, 2005 21:14:00 GMT -5
Chapters 2 and 3 are up!
Wwwwwow!
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Hatake Hiroshi
Lieutenant Hokage
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Beat me brother, with a solid four!
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Post by Hatake Hiroshi on Jul 20, 2005 21:30:56 GMT -5
It's so AWESOME! I can't wait to read more! ^_^
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Post by Sorien on Jul 20, 2005 23:07:53 GMT -5
*blink blink* Oooooh...k. Well I guess I should read before I judge...but...odd idea ^_^.
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Post by Kiel on Jul 21, 2005 8:35:28 GMT -5
Yes...indeed.
Ever since I saw the movie, I was a bit inspired. I picked up a copy of the original book (I've read it before, but never owned it), referenced it, and started writing.
FF.net is in dire need of some non furry and non yoai Naruto fanfiction.
Chapters 4 and 5 are up!
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Post by Kiel on Jul 21, 2005 14:20:01 GMT -5
Okay, chapters 6 and 7 are up now.
6: Hinata Begins to Starve
7: The Miracle
ooh, and because i loves Konoha Village board members so much, I'm going to share some tidbits of info about the fic for those hard of thinking.
In chapter 7, a new character is introduced. Let me assure you that this character is absolute PURE EVIL!!!!!!
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...the point is, evil is often backwards...yeah
^_^ enjoy your crazy hint!
Chapter 8 and 9 should be up either late tonight or early tomorrow morning.
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Post by Kiel on Jul 22, 2005 8:27:30 GMT -5
Chapter 8 is up. It's a tad more lengthy than the others, but that's cuz it's jam packed with all sorts of chocolately goodness.
Also, the introduction of Willy Wonka!
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Post by Kiel on Jul 22, 2005 20:41:15 GMT -5
Chapter 9 & 10 are up!
Oompa-Loompas, full of hype,
Yoriko Glupu goes up the pipe! ^_^
enjoy!
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Post by Kiel on Jul 24, 2005 11:21:29 GMT -5
Chapter 11 is now up!
The Inventng room! The boat ride! The gum machne!
what else does this fatory have in store for our intrepid genins?
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Post by Kiel on Jul 26, 2005 16:11:46 GMT -5
Well, after a few interruptions, chapter 12 is finally up!
2 children down, 3 to go! Er...I mean 2 to go...yeah, 2...that's right...ehehehehe
Interesting fact: Ever wonder where I got all of the new children's names from? Yeah, me neither, but I'm gonna tell you anyway!
Almost all of the new names are mixed up from names in the PS2 games "Siren" and "RAD: Robot Alchemic Drive". If you own either of these games and are dying of sheer boredom, go look in their instruction booklets and see if you can spot the names
hehehehe...
...yeah, I'm getting bored too.
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Post by Kiel on Jul 26, 2005 20:39:26 GMT -5
OMG! The seventh consecuative update on this fic.
The 13th chapter is up, entitled "Wonka-san's Flashback down the Corridor"
If you haven't read any of it yet, this is an interesting one to start with. I think it's one of my most powerful little moments in writing that I've ever done.
At least, I think it is...
Please read this one and leave a review if you have the time.
Thanks a bundle!
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Post by Kiel on Aug 1, 2005 7:02:58 GMT -5
Okay, another child down, only 2 more to go!
What fate is in store for Souya Ikari?
Will Hinata recieve the same prize that Charlie did, or something completely different?
Check it out to find out!
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Post by Kiel on Aug 6, 2005 11:21:59 GMT -5
Chapters 16 and 17 are up.
If you've been waiting for some actual ninja action in this story, you'll be pleasently surprised.
Hinata blossoms, and proves she's truly an heir to the Byakugan.
4! 8! 16! 32! 64! Hai!
check em out.
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Post by Kiel on Aug 6, 2005 21:07:50 GMT -5
And so, chapter 18: Only Hinata Left, is up.
The other children go home,
what awaits Hinata now? Will she share the same fate as Charlie, or something completely different?
Who knows?
...well, I do ^^
check it out
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