Saizuku Niwada (Hidden Leaf) -APPROVED-

[Saizuku]

Name: Saizuku Niwada(Leaf Village is where he at)

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Rank: Genin

Appearance: retsgip.files.wordpress.com/2006/09/ag22-3.jpg

Personality: Saizuku is a rolling beat of energy and also has defined abilities on his speed and agility which he uses to get out of situations against opponents. He is a steadfast individual and his attitude will never change towards anyone he meets no matter how much crap they do to him. He is also true to himself and will never change his ways towards anyone. He is very impatient towards anything that he sees is taking to long and also very rebellious. Saizuku is also like the wind and has a free-spirit and even a adventurous style towards anything he sees as an adventure to him. Also Saizuku cherishes freedom the most and is a very big person on himself and will do anything to keep his freedom. His biggest liking is running and playing a DJ and he likes doing this as his hobbies. He hates slow moving objects or people that are slow moving and oppression which means to block off any freedom for anyone. Saizuku likes to be fast paced overall and is not patient at all towards anyone but he will never back down from challenges and is always confident in his speed and jutsu.

History: Saizuku is a free-spirited kid born on May of the 15th on the days of spring. Although he was a baby Saizuku loved freedom as much as anything in his life when he wanted to do anything he always yearned for the freedom to actually do it and as a baby learned to crawl and walk at a early age of 7 months to his determination to wanna learn to walk as his parents did. Also as a baby he was small and mischeivious and very cunning towards his parents not knowing what he was up to ever this was happening at two years old. At age six he entered leaf academy as a kid with blue hair and green emerald eyes which was fascinating towards the girls of his school and also the teachers a combination never seen by them like that before.

Saizuku while he was at the academy was very free-spirited not caring of what teachers said to him which brought out his rebelliousness towards any and everyone he met he girls. Although he did not seem so he was very attentive towards the lessons he just never did what he was told in seating or playing with things around him or talking to girls around him. Saizuku during these years trained his body in agility and also speed to build his reflexes and charge his speed techniques and abilities in speed. Saizuku loved going to new places where he could see new sights and broaden his horizons to grow so he usually went to places everyday at the end of school to see these places with his friends of the academy. Saizuku at the end of his academy years became genin and loved it to his head band on his leg to show he was one and also now knew many techniques on his own speed.


Optional Statistics:
Favorite Jutsu-------------
Name:Saizuku Special-Spin Dash Destruction Technique
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Desc:A technique that has been produced by Saizuku the Speed Demon himself as one of his favorite and most powerful techniques in his arsenal. After doing the Bird and Dog Hand Seals,Saizuku first starts to charge chakra around himself then he flips into the air as he does he starts to turn into a ball on chakra enforced energy and lands on the ground as he spins like a sharp round saw. This technique's cutting ability is a variation of the Human Meat Tank which is to crush although Saizuku except this technique is much faster and also isn't as big or as powerful but it can still ram into a a enemy also as it grows more,it cutting power increases and it controls better. The weaknesses towards this jutsu is simply that first he can not see his opponents as clearly as he should and this technique makes him dizzy easily and makes him wanna puke afterwards.

Name: Saizuku's Special 2-Growing Quills Attack
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Desc: By utilizing chakra into his hair and doing 3 handseals again with bird,rat and then ox he can grow his hair and grow it sharp like swords or quills on a hedgehogs back and make them sharper for his Spin Dash Destroyer Attack,this technique is ongoing for a period of 5 minutes and no less. His body can withstand this technique at least 10 times a day until he can't use this jutsu again until the next day. This technique helps The Spin Dash for much harder attacking and for much more speed. This techniques weak point for a genin the chakra he has to input is ongoing which he can only control for 5 minutes now he will be able to control it more when his chakra control goes up.

[Tensei Kaori]

Hi there, and welcome to the IF! I'm glad to see a new face around here. Be sure and head over to the Message Center and introduce yourself, so we can get to know you! ^__^

Anyways, I love your bio! However, there are just a few things I'd like to address before I can approve it. Don't worry - these are minor edits, and won't take away from your character.

First, please specify the village to which you wish your character to belong.

Second is the walking age of two months - while I understand how this would display your character's love of freedom at a young age, I'm afraid this just isn't possible. It takes an average of nine to twelve months for a baby to learn how to walk, simply because babies are born with neither the muscle strength nor the coordination to do so. While I'm all right with Niwada's learning to walk early, two months simply isn't possible.

Lastly, I'd like you to take the power level of your jutsu down a notch, at least for now. While I'm fine with you developing these jutsu into what you have them written as currently - over a reasonable period of time, they're a little powerful for a 12-year-old Genin. Putting a reasonable limit on how long he is able to perform these jutsu, and how often - as well as describing the weaknesses of each jutsu - is strongly reccommended. Currently, I'd like you to hold off on the ability to slice through enemies - though, as I said previously, I'm more than happy to let you develop it as you participate in the IF and Niwada increases in strength, experience, and eventually rank.

As for the hair spikes, as I can see how this would be a weakness as much as a strength, I'd like to ask you why you chose twenty minutes for the time limit, how this would affect Niwada's chakra, and any possible side effects it may have. Once I know that, I'll know whether or not to approve it.

Thank you for your patience, and I can't wait to have you in the IF! If you feel lost or have any questions, please feel free to contact me personally or post your concerns in the ANBU Headquarters, where our friendly staff will be more than happy to assist you.

~Kaori

[Saizuku]

OK got got it done

[Tensei Kaori]

Thank you for your cooperation. almost everything's in order now, so as far as I'm concerned you're approved - once you specify a village. Two more staff approvals and you're good to go! While you're waiting, it might be a good idea to read up on what's been going on thus far in the Interactive Fanfiction, if you haven't already. Happy "IFing"!

[Saizuku]

I already read I wanted to be inquired Kaori-Sama

[Tensei Kaori]

I'm glad you're on top of things! As for "being inquired", I apologize but I really have no idea what you mean. ^^;

As it is, please choose a village for your character and specify it clearly in the subject line as is stated in the stickied thread labeled "read before posting". Your bio is great, and the only thing keeping you from approval is that one tiny detail. Thank you! ^^

[Hatake Hiroshi]

Hey there! Welcome! It's wonderful to see some new faces in the IF. You're bio is very well-written and thought out. Great job!

There is one thing I see that needs some tweaking, though, but it's nothing major. Your "Spin Dash Destruction" jutsu should be ninjutsu instead of taijutsu, since taijutsu does not involve the use of chakra. It would only make sense, too... since it seems to build on the "Growing Quills" jutsu.

And don't forget to edit in your village into the topic! Please!

Other than that, you've got your approval from me! One more to go, and you'll be set. I can't wait to see Niwada in the IF!

And to reiterate what Kaori said, if you need any help, please don't hesitate to ask. It's our job as the Staff to make sure your involvement in the IF is as smooth and fun as possible! Post a question in ANBU Headquarters or feel free to contact any of us personally if you prefer. Again, welcome to VoK. It's great to have you!

[Saizuku]

Thanks and I did it Hatake Sensei

[UchihaJyounochi]

Well, as far as I can tell, after all the changes, everything seems to be in working order. Glad to see yah here, and can't wait to see yah in the fic. Approved!

[Tensei Kaori]

You're all set! Don't forget to sign up for a team and check out the latest missions available! ^__^

[Saizuku]

How do u sign up for teams Kaori-Sama

[Hatake Hiroshi]

There's a thread in the Out of Character Planning Board under Hidden Leaf Planning called "Three-Man Teams." If you just post there letting us know you need a team, we'll add you.

[Tensei Kaori]

Just post here. ^^