Post by SegatakaiIdaten on Oct 8, 2005 0:01:11 GMT -5
Name: Yoshiunko Makotsai
Age: 13
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 125 lbs
Rank: Gennin
Clan: Shinka (sacred flame)
Physical Description: Yoshiunko Makotsai is not very tall for his age (at least I think), Stark white hair down to his chin with a blood red strand down the back of his head. One Black eye (left) and one blue (right). Medium to minimal build (he isn’t weak) on the left chest wrapping around to the back left shoulder is a burn scar, not too disfiguring, but absolutely noticeable. He wears his forehead protector wrapped around his left side (protecting the damaged skin from the burn). Under that he wears a white sleeveless under shirt and dark blue pants. He also wears silver bracers on each wrist.
Weapons: Normal kunai/shrunken, two small knives hidden under the lip of his bracers. Also he uses some wrist blades or gauntlets that attach to his bracers.
Personality: Makotsai is usually very quiet and very, DEATHLY scared of fire. In being quiet he is very obedient, if he is asked to do a task, he does it. If he feels the task is tedious, he doesn’t show or say it. When he is with a group of people he has a smile on most of the time… until he sees friends with their dads. His dad is still mad at him.
Aspirations: Makotsai first of all wants to stay away from fire, but his wish to appease his father is driving him to maybe get rid of this stupid fear of fire, but recollections of the day haunt him gravly. He also wants to become just like his brother. His brother helped him in times of needs, so Makotsai wants to be that kinda of a person. A helper.
Background: He was born into the Shinka family, a fire specializing family, one different thing about this flame, was that all of their fire Jutsu was white, so hot it was white. He grew up with his older brother Shinoku and his father and mother. As normal for any child, he was taught the basics of ninja from his parents before he went to the academy, very basic things. Well he was showing promising steps forward so his father showed him one of his fire jutsus. Howaido-kaen nojutsu was the first jutsu he was taught. At first he had a hard time with the hand seals, and couldn’t get them right the first few times… it was his first lesson in hand seals.
Later that year his father was gone from home and wasn’t able to help Makotsai with his training. Makotsai wanted to impress his father and master it without his help. Usually his father led him to the lake to practice safely, but Makotsai didn’t know the way, so he practiced in his back yard. He missed his impromptu targets and hit a hut down the way where people his neighbors were. The house immediately caught flame, and began to crumble under the heat and the erosion of the flames. He called for help as loud as he could while running inside the house to help them out. On the last occupant he tripped pushing him out of the home and Makotsai fell having debris fall on his left side burning him badly also heating the air to extreme temperatures. Breathing hard, the air burned his mouth and more importantly his vocal cords. His brother and mother ran outside broke through the rubble and took him from the house. He was hurt badly on the outside, but no one knew then and there he had lost his voice. His wounds were mended and he lay recovering for a week or two, all the while his father despising himself for teaching his child a technique he wasn’t ready to learn. He was the most upset. His brother and mother were much lighter hearted towards him. Later they found he was unable to speak the father in shame told no one, and kept his son inside. Makotsai was fearful of fire from then on, so much he stayed out of the kitchen because he knew the stove was there. His father was still mad, but bent on making his screw up son a true ninja. Makotsai’s older brother loved him very much, and wanted to help any way he could, and he could help. Shinoku was a two year Chunnin and knew lots of their clan’s jutsus. Even sometimes he would let Makotsai "win" to maybe build some confidence in him to overcome his weakness.
For the longest time Makotsai stayed inside being taught by his brother most of the time. For his father was still embarrassed over his son’s mistake. Because his teachers were susceptible to going on missions, he practiced a lot by himself… this time on their lake! He couldn’t speak so they had to use homemade signs to communicate. Makotsai, using his hands only… and all the time, learned the seals and mastered them completely. He even "beat" his brother in speed. Plus he started developing his own style of one-handed signs. There is 35% chance of it working and him controling it. Also the jutsu is at half power, and it takes twice as many seals to perform a jutsu.
Makotsai is 11 or 12 years old now, and all of his family was gone for a special assignment given to them by the Hokage herself. This was his chance to see people his age for he hasn’t been out of his property for years, he knew no one. He was walking down the street and a tall lady walking very fast stopped and noticed that he looked old enough to be in the academe, but she had just left the academy to speak with some of the teachers. “Why aren’t you at the academy?” of course he said nothing. She asked again and still he said nothing. So she took him by the hand and walked him back to the academy. “Here! I found a straggler!” She quickly found he was never in the academy and also noticed after asking many question that he could not speak. So he wrote down who he was and his clan name. She was really confused and noticed that on the tip of his neck was a burn mark, then noticed the scar. She took him to the hospital and she (through her loving kindness) healed Makotsai’s vocal cords… for the first time in years Makotsai had heard his own voice. It was hard for him to start using it again and still wanted to use the signs he was using. He was sent home with a smile and a note from the Hokage to her father and mother to take Makotsai to the academy.
Academy was practically a review for Makotsai; he had learned all he needed to learn from his brother and father (sometimes). So needless to say he graduated VERY quickly and earned the name of Gennin at the age of 12 ½.
Jutsu: There are a few, and i will post them, but im really tired.
Sorry its so long, and i look forward to your replies!
Age: 13
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 125 lbs
Rank: Gennin
Clan: Shinka (sacred flame)
Physical Description: Yoshiunko Makotsai is not very tall for his age (at least I think), Stark white hair down to his chin with a blood red strand down the back of his head. One Black eye (left) and one blue (right). Medium to minimal build (he isn’t weak) on the left chest wrapping around to the back left shoulder is a burn scar, not too disfiguring, but absolutely noticeable. He wears his forehead protector wrapped around his left side (protecting the damaged skin from the burn). Under that he wears a white sleeveless under shirt and dark blue pants. He also wears silver bracers on each wrist.
Weapons: Normal kunai/shrunken, two small knives hidden under the lip of his bracers. Also he uses some wrist blades or gauntlets that attach to his bracers.
Personality: Makotsai is usually very quiet and very, DEATHLY scared of fire. In being quiet he is very obedient, if he is asked to do a task, he does it. If he feels the task is tedious, he doesn’t show or say it. When he is with a group of people he has a smile on most of the time… until he sees friends with their dads. His dad is still mad at him.
Aspirations: Makotsai first of all wants to stay away from fire, but his wish to appease his father is driving him to maybe get rid of this stupid fear of fire, but recollections of the day haunt him gravly. He also wants to become just like his brother. His brother helped him in times of needs, so Makotsai wants to be that kinda of a person. A helper.
Background: He was born into the Shinka family, a fire specializing family, one different thing about this flame, was that all of their fire Jutsu was white, so hot it was white. He grew up with his older brother Shinoku and his father and mother. As normal for any child, he was taught the basics of ninja from his parents before he went to the academy, very basic things. Well he was showing promising steps forward so his father showed him one of his fire jutsus. Howaido-kaen nojutsu was the first jutsu he was taught. At first he had a hard time with the hand seals, and couldn’t get them right the first few times… it was his first lesson in hand seals.
Later that year his father was gone from home and wasn’t able to help Makotsai with his training. Makotsai wanted to impress his father and master it without his help. Usually his father led him to the lake to practice safely, but Makotsai didn’t know the way, so he practiced in his back yard. He missed his impromptu targets and hit a hut down the way where people his neighbors were. The house immediately caught flame, and began to crumble under the heat and the erosion of the flames. He called for help as loud as he could while running inside the house to help them out. On the last occupant he tripped pushing him out of the home and Makotsai fell having debris fall on his left side burning him badly also heating the air to extreme temperatures. Breathing hard, the air burned his mouth and more importantly his vocal cords. His brother and mother ran outside broke through the rubble and took him from the house. He was hurt badly on the outside, but no one knew then and there he had lost his voice. His wounds were mended and he lay recovering for a week or two, all the while his father despising himself for teaching his child a technique he wasn’t ready to learn. He was the most upset. His brother and mother were much lighter hearted towards him. Later they found he was unable to speak the father in shame told no one, and kept his son inside. Makotsai was fearful of fire from then on, so much he stayed out of the kitchen because he knew the stove was there. His father was still mad, but bent on making his screw up son a true ninja. Makotsai’s older brother loved him very much, and wanted to help any way he could, and he could help. Shinoku was a two year Chunnin and knew lots of their clan’s jutsus. Even sometimes he would let Makotsai "win" to maybe build some confidence in him to overcome his weakness.
For the longest time Makotsai stayed inside being taught by his brother most of the time. For his father was still embarrassed over his son’s mistake. Because his teachers were susceptible to going on missions, he practiced a lot by himself… this time on their lake! He couldn’t speak so they had to use homemade signs to communicate. Makotsai, using his hands only… and all the time, learned the seals and mastered them completely. He even "beat" his brother in speed. Plus he started developing his own style of one-handed signs. There is 35% chance of it working and him controling it. Also the jutsu is at half power, and it takes twice as many seals to perform a jutsu.
Makotsai is 11 or 12 years old now, and all of his family was gone for a special assignment given to them by the Hokage herself. This was his chance to see people his age for he hasn’t been out of his property for years, he knew no one. He was walking down the street and a tall lady walking very fast stopped and noticed that he looked old enough to be in the academe, but she had just left the academy to speak with some of the teachers. “Why aren’t you at the academy?” of course he said nothing. She asked again and still he said nothing. So she took him by the hand and walked him back to the academy. “Here! I found a straggler!” She quickly found he was never in the academy and also noticed after asking many question that he could not speak. So he wrote down who he was and his clan name. She was really confused and noticed that on the tip of his neck was a burn mark, then noticed the scar. She took him to the hospital and she (through her loving kindness) healed Makotsai’s vocal cords… for the first time in years Makotsai had heard his own voice. It was hard for him to start using it again and still wanted to use the signs he was using. He was sent home with a smile and a note from the Hokage to her father and mother to take Makotsai to the academy.
Academy was practically a review for Makotsai; he had learned all he needed to learn from his brother and father (sometimes). So needless to say he graduated VERY quickly and earned the name of Gennin at the age of 12 ½.
Jutsu: There are a few, and i will post them, but im really tired.
Sorry its so long, and i look forward to your replies!
