Dakk
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Post by Dakk on Dec 1, 2005 0:49:45 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Dakk Aburame's Jutsus:[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]Ninjutsu:[/glow]
Suiganmourou-No-Jutsu:
The Blur Technique. Having been dissatisfied with the Shadow Clone technique, Dakk did research, and, using the same basis of ninjutsu, developed what he calls his "Blur Jutsu". This is a low-chakra consumption jutsu that makes him appear something like a blurred watercolor, with afterimages when he moves. The Dakk people see when this jutsu is active appears to vibrate, and is half-again as wide as normal. The real Dakk is normal-sized, but this "Blur" effect makes it nigh-impossible to hit a vital area on him, save for extreme good luck. Although it doesn't make it too much harder to hit Dakk, it does make it hard to hit him someplace important. This effect, through much training, even works against eye-jutsu, such as Byakugaan, blurring even the image of chakra lines, although this uses much more chakra, and the user of an eye-jutsu can use the dispel effect to make it easier to spot the real Dakk within the blur.
(I hope that this jutsu is acceptable, added to the Aburame Clan's bug techniques? If not, I understand...)
[glow=red,2,300]Taijutsu:[/glow]
Dakk has picked up a few techniques from childhood friends in the Lee clan, and is above-average (for a Genin) in Taijutsu. What he has learned follows Mantis Kung Fu, an art that has always intrigued him, especially because it's based on a favorite insect of his. He is not particularly advanced in Mantis, but would like to become so.
[glow=red,2,300]Genjutsu:[/glow]
Dakk has learned no jutsus in this class, yet, but would like to.
[glow=red,2,300]Summoning Jutsu:[/glow]
Dakk is not liable to learn any of these, as he has never liked self-harm, and was pestered by his family to use it, as a child.
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Post by Sorien on Dec 1, 2005 1:26:24 GMT -5
Oh yeah...this is shaping up well. I've been suggesting things over IM, so I'll wait for the finished product and I'll re-comment from there. Nice and unique so far. A character similar to Rock Lee.
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Post by Kiri on Dec 1, 2005 20:53:10 GMT -5
YAY. First martial arts master in the IF that I know of. ^__^ That was really neat and interesting to read. He sounds like he'll shape up to be quite a formidable opponent, especially with all that combined with his Blur Jutsu.
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Post by SeraphMazrakiel on Dec 2, 2005 21:55:21 GMT -5
Lol. Depends. Based on real martial arts. IF-wise, Maz did 'Handguard'... but yeah. XP
Good job, though. XD
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Dakk
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Post by Dakk on Dec 3, 2005 5:52:07 GMT -5
Lol. Depends. Based on real martial arts. IF-wise, Maz did 'Handguard'... but yeah. XP Good job, though. XD So, do you think that Maz could beat Dakk in Taijutsu, then? What is "Handguard"? Can someone link me...? ~Dakk |
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Post by Sorien on Dec 3, 2005 15:03:37 GMT -5
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Post by UchihaJyounochi on Dec 4, 2005 20:07:51 GMT -5
Sounds really good so far Dakk, keep up the good work!
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Post by Tensei Kaori on Dec 5, 2005 18:16:32 GMT -5
That's a mighty big collection of knowledge you've got there.
However, I have one question - how many of those Jutsu does Dakk actually practice? If it's only those 3, I can consider it so long as he doesn't completely master them all until he progresses - at age 16, and low rank at that - but if he knows all of that list, then we have a problem.
I hate to sound mean, but we have rules against godmodding - that is, acting invincible, for anyone who didn't know - and rules are what they are for a reason. Anyways, let me know, and I'll be happy to talk. ^^
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Post by SeraphMazrakiel on Dec 6, 2005 0:55:27 GMT -5
Well, as long as we all understand that it will actually be several years before he masters the whole list. And that he learns more as his rank increases. Power in relation to rank and age, ya? As a Genin I think it would be believable to have him know only one or two. Three I think is a bit of a stretch, but well, I suppose if he's like Rock Lee and has very little understanding of ninjutsu and genjutsu, it might be alright.
All said, I'm looking forward to a Jounin Dakk, when he's an adult. XD
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Post by Sorien on Dec 6, 2005 5:11:29 GMT -5
Yeah. Seeing as the last edit was at 6.08pm (For me where I am) and even Maz's comment above me isn't as up to date with the last edit, people could re-visit this again. I was waiting to see what you were going to do. So Karate, Kung Fu and Aikido eh? Interesting. As Maz said though, I would like to see the adult too. Gawd. You could NEVER tell what he would be about to do. With so many styles at his disposal.
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Post by Tensei Kaori on Dec 6, 2005 23:32:58 GMT -5
I was encouraged when I read Sorien's comment, however, I do still find some problems here.
Just what do you mean by "complete mastery"? Do you mean a simple knowledge of every single move in that martial art? Maybe then I can see a possibility that this would work, because and only because I have been doing research, and thus far your numbers seem to be fairly accurate taking into account two things: Dakk is already 16 and comes from a family of Monks: in Roleplay, the elite fighting class that can beat anyone in hand-to-hand; and in Naruto, things are not exactly realistic.
However, the numbers I looked up were for studying that particular martial art *only*, devoting one's entire martial arts studies to it, with training 2-3 times a week at a minimum, and the numbers were only for levels of 1st degree Black Belt, where Belt colors are used. The other sources were the same: "you are proficient at this level; now here is where the true learning begins." All the sources agree on this: to 'completely master' a martial art, you must:
1) Choose a path: one single form of martial art you wish to study.
2) Devote your life to nothing but that one single martial art: practice it, teach it, refine it; it literally becomes your way of life.
3) Live forever.
To follow a Martial Art is to follow a way of life: even more so for the Do forms - Judo, Akido, Kendo, etc. These forms are a way of living as well as fighting styles. Even the suffix 'do' can be roughly translated into 'way of (the) ______". In this case, it would be self-contradictory to study more than one.
If you wish to simply study and learn all the 'moves', though, it may be concievable within the human lifespan. However, I believe that should you do this, while your character would be a master fighter, you'd be missing out on the best part of martial arts. But that's your choice.
So, here's the verdict---
Provided that:
1) Dakk spends equal time studying each of these arts (He'd have very little time for anything else, including things like missions and eating; if you'd like to see the math behind it I'd be happy to show it to you, but that's your choice in the end)....
2)...'Complete Mastery' is changed to 1st Dan Black Belt or Equivalent (in the cases when the colored belt system is not used, or is different from that in Karate) and is defined as a technical mastery and not following a Do....
3)....And you are willing to have a character that has literally no time for anything but martial arts - and doesn't advance very quickly in rank, as he will have hardly any time for missions of any kind, as those take one day at minimum....
... I will be willing to allow it. This is my final word and I will not negotiate. If you'd like, you could also choose to have Dakk follow only one path (in the case of Animal Kung Fu, this would be only one animal style, and so on) and come as close to true mastery as humanly possible towards the end of his natural life - that is, however long he would live, excluding illness and death in combat, accident, or any other situation that would result in premature death. Either one of these options is fine with me.
I don't want to be mean, but it's done so everyone gets a fair shot. As a Graduate, you still have quite a ways to go, so don't look to be insanely powerful quite yet. You earn that right as you earn more rank stars under your username (or your Display name, as is the case with some). You've created a very good character and I hope to see him in the IF in a way will be fun and fair for everyone.
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Post by Dakk on Dec 7, 2005 5:19:10 GMT -5
So be it. I will re-create my character to be "Dakk Aburame", a descendant of Shino Aburame.
Please see my new Bio! I would appreciate it if you pass judgement on his approval, or have one of your ANBU do so, as soon as possible.
I apologize for all the inconvenience, and thanks for enduring all of this trouble!
~Dakk
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